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Welcome to the fight of your life. In this story, YOU control the action, YOU control the adventure, and YOU control your fate. At the end of each section, there will be choices with links to the next chapter in your  struggle for survival. But beware, your choices may lead you to salvation… or destruction. Will you survive the Nobody stronghold, the Castle that Never Was? And be forewarned, things can get a little messy… this journey is not for the faint of heart.





You awaken, sprawled out on what appeared to be dirty asphalt. Your head feels like it will split in half at any moment. Reaching up to feel the back of it, you notice a large lump. So that's what happened. You must have been knocked out and dragged here. That would explain the large blank you had in your memories. The last thing you remembered was walking into your house back in Traverse Town, and yet, now you were here.

Groaning, you slowly sit up to inspect your surroundings. Tall buildings with bright neon lights surround you on all sides. But even with the blue and yellow lights surrounding you, the street you lie on is still oppressively dark. It's a place you've never been before, and yet you know exactly where you are.

The City That Never Was.

Your blood runs cold. This is a very dangerous place to be lost. Not only are there countless Heartless and Nobodies, but you could run into members of Organization XIII at any moment. Worst of all, you don't have a weapon. Your weapon was at home, safely hanging from the wall above your bed. You have nothing to defend yourself, but your head is hurting bad enough that it would seriously hinder your ability to fight anyway.

Your heart begins to race as you realize the situation you're in. At any moment, you could be ambushed by Heartless or Nobodies. You have to do something before you end up dead.
You look around for anything that would help you survive. The only things you see are a short metal pipe and two pieces of a sawed-in-half two-by-four.

Which do you choose?
The pipe: LINK
The two-by-fours: LINK
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So here is the beginning of your story. How will it end?

But before you move on, please read this. I love comments and :+fav:s. Comment wherever you want! It doesn't matter what chapter or section, go for it!
BUT... if you want to fav, please fav this first section! You can fav the others too, but make sure to fav this one as well! I know, it's a lot to ask, but this way I can keep track of how many people liked it a whole lot easier.

Thank you so much for reading. I hope you enjoy the story! ^_^






Characters and setting owned by Square Enix and Disney
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~xemnas-reshiram-fan Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is an amazing adventure-to-be.
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~Blackk4t304 Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WHAOW!!! 8D

Are all of the organization members in there somewhere? if not can you name the ones that are?
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Oh my gosh! This is amazing! It's like this one book series I read called "What if..." You pick what the main character does at the end of each chapter and it could either be good or bad. I love these types of books! I'm defiantly eager to go through these!! :D
Fantastic job! :iconpinklilyplz:
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~Miescha Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm so glad you like this! I actually based it off of R. L. Stein's Goosebump books. He had a few "Choose-your-own-fate" stories such as this one. ^_^

I'm sure, by now, you've gone through them all, so I'll just say thanks for reading! :D
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:iconbblondiegrl07:
Oh my gosh I forgot all about those books! I used to love those!
Oh you're welcome! :D
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This was AMAZING~!!! I loved it soooo much~:heart:
You get this :iconbigcookieplz:
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~Miescha Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:O COOKIE!!!! :D *dances around with cyber cookie* This made my day, thank you so much! ^_^
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Aw, you're welcome~:heart:
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!xKingdomHearts Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
looking at the conver makes me feel like im in..
Saw.
i feel like scared already :fear:
I can't wait to read this :iconroxasderpplz:
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~Miescha Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Haha awesome. :D well, have fun! And thanks for the :+fav:s!!! :hug:
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